Homework tonight: go back to your essay and rewrite your opening introduction and conclusion.
Body paragraph writing seems to be progressing well. However many of you still seem to have trouble writing effective introductions and conclusions. Have a look at these examples:
Remember: quotes are not the only evidence. You can also use details about symbollism, narrative structure, stagecraft etc as part of your evidence to support your claims. Click here to view the powerpoint about the stagecraft and narrative structure of Inheritance